But then, you wouldn't want the action angle to be strong exactly while you're IN the story, right? People get hurt that way. Even killed. A fairy in an orange dress with brown hair and glasses drifted past, startling her. "Kiana!" She tried to catch the figure, begging her to stay, but always the garments were just out of reach. A moment later she was gone and the Writer stared after her, tears trailing down her cheeks.